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I think for Thunder, maybe next time try drawing her muzzle/snout a bit shorter, especially at an angle like that. I really like how you did the legs, and the rest of the body seems fine too!
Is Rosie supposed to not be facing her? It looks like she's kinda growling to herself (kinda like how people mutter about stuff angrily) rather than directing her emotion at Thunder, but that's fine. ^^ I think maybe you should give her more of a something to look at, since her eye kinda looks like it's randomly placed, and maybe a pupil would be good too. ^^ I like Blazefang's expression. xDD
He looks so cute and innocent down there, wondering why they're fighting and appearing very uncomfortable about it. xD Haha, nice job overall. x) I should draw some more too. o:
ALSO SORRY I TOOK SO LONG. >:Z I forget to check my dA messages (since I have so many watch messages, I don't often get to see new things people put up) so I didn't see it till recently. D:
Haha, 'cute and innocent'. XD Blazefang doesn't often look like that!
That's okay!
xDD Haha, I know, right? xD But here he kinda does. x)
He does. XD
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